zero 420, you're nudging right next to being a real good t-shirt artist & you don't even know it..your character is darling but you're right & there is a lot of things that could have been done differently--you're even seeing all of this & each shirt you've been doing has turned out better..now is the time to throw another shirt or pellon on the easle & do another tweety--I probably did 4 of them today--(I raised my prices & I'm not getting as many toons--& that means I've got it just right!!)..
Do a google search & copy one with pretty shading--copying in my books is not a terrible crime & is in fact a great learning tool..This time throw a little hot pink into the yellow & see what a pretty shade color you get--make his bandana red with a maroon shade--I usually give my toons a dark colorbook outline I then come back with color..that would mean line work between the legs..You're a little haphazard with your highlights but all of this takes study & aren't you the young man who's going to quit??--You're getting too good & you're too hooked for something so silly.. Now I can't promise that you won't starve to death but it's a deffinate that you could be a special airbrush artist..

--the lettering was handled with thought & was about all you could do--it's always more difficult to have letters going vertically--air todd did it once before pretty nicely but it's very hard for a beginner..all in all this is a well done shirt..
