First painting - feedback?

[riffraff]

Hi All,

Im a newby - I got my first airbrush on monday and love it - its an iwata HP-SBS.

Anyway this is my first painting I didnt bother practicing apart from some squggles and a few circles to get the feel of it... dagger strokes are damn hard... I just decided to jum right in...

this is done with com-art paints on sketch pad paper...
the last one is a skull that happened while changing colors and scribling wife said the bottom bits looked like teeth and the splat like an eye so I added to it wheneve I had to swap paint/clean

please let me know what you think!
riff.


http://img294.imageshack.us/img294/566/smokena0.jpg
http://img153.imageshack.us/img153/1863/smoke1ej8.jpg
http://img300.imageshack.us/img300/9860/smoke2rl8.jpg
http://img257.imageshack.us/img257/9783/smoke3bd3.jpg
http://img257.imageshack.us/img257/7663/skullmh3.jpg

[airbrushazazin]

pretty good

[thearthound]

First Painting? Very Good. I like the skull too!
Did you just quit smoking? LOL

[AirTodd]

Pretty good.Now practice dots and dagger strokes.

[riffraff]

Hahaha, no Im not a smoker... dont know why I chose a cigarette but... gritty and not too hard I suppose... no difficult colours to mix etc...

Ive done a stack of dots today... heaps of fun... my dagger strokes still suck... ha!

thanks for the feedback

riff