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finished dungeon
GENERAL AIRBRUSH TECHNIQUES DISCUSSIONS
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03-22-2006
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finished dungeon
well here it is.....let me have it  tell me what you think please !!!!!
sorry for the glare forgot to take the pic pefore it got framed.... |
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03-22-2006
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Re: finished dungeon
that's good! There is a lot that stands out to me. particularly the tatoo's. great detail in those. the shackles and barrel look great. good roundness of the stones in the wall and reflection of light. I like it. you should be proud.
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03-22-2006
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Re: finished dungeon
Well done, Mayhem!!!!! I like the detail work on the door and barrel. Of course, the tats go without saying. You've outdone yourself. Can't wait to see the next one.
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03-22-2006
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Re: finished dungeon
good painting mayhem, don't worry about the glare tell everybody that it is the sun shining through the window
which is my impression of the glare
sandstone ray
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03-22-2006
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Re: finished dungeon
Very Well Done Mayhem your work just gets better and better every time you paint. keep posting your work !! it's great to see your progress
RK04
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03-22-2006
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Re: finished dungeon
You are improving in giant leaps! Good job! One thing that looks a little off to me is to the right of the barrel. It looks as though the girl is sitting against a different wall than the barrel yet the wall above her looks like it is all one. The black between the barrel and the straightness of her hair seem to create that edge. It could be just the photo not picking up the detail of your painting. Hope you don't mind the critique. Oh ya did you tell your wife yet the meaning behind the painting?
EDIT: I went back and looked at the close up of that section from one of your earlier posts ,the space between the barrel and her hair looked great there. So maybe it is just the photo.
Last edited by army; 03-22-2006 at 11:24 PM.
Reason: looked at the older close up of that section
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03-23-2006
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Re: finished dungeon
thank you for your comments !!!!! I had alot of fun with this one !!! army id did tell my wife ...well I wrote it on the back of the frame and she saw it when I gave it to her...I figured it ment more written on it then if I just told her ....
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03-23-2006
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Re: finished dungeon
It turned out Great mayhem.
nice job.
/kimmo
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03-23-2006
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Re: finished dungeon
mayhem, As usual, great job!  |
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03-23-2006
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#10 (permalink)
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Re: finished dungeon
that turned out great. So is your wife going to make you sale it?
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03-23-2006
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#11 (permalink)
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Re: finished dungeon
I've been doing graphite pencil portraits for years. The one thing that stands out, is it seems a bit "outliny"...if that makes sense. It seems the outlines and dark areas are too dark. Were you going for a realism look? Or a particular style?
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