Dragons Eye

[rhysgroves]

Hi guys have taken on board what you said and tryed to work with colour and shade, what do you think?

[heartless]

not too bad, interesting design.
constructive criticism - decide where your "light source" is gonna be and shade/highlight with that light source in mind.
example...if the light source is upper right, then only upper right areas should be highlighted, lower left areas would be shadowed - am i making sense? or have i totally confused you?

very cool for just starting out
i agree it needs more defination as in highlighting, shading but very good for one of your first goes

I like it!! I think it lacks a little confidence pertaining to technique & needs tighter linework & sharper daggers but overall it's a great start..welcome to airbrushing..you're sinking in deep now--next you'll put the eye on a dragons head, & then the head on a body, finishing off with a taill--Seems to me you're getting sunk into this pit of airbrushing for sure..I don't know whether to congratulate you or take pity on you?? Nice job!!

[grinnen30]

Rhysgroves-
Don't take their constructive criticism other than what it is...trying to make you a better artist. I have the same problem. One thing I am trying to do to remind me of where the light source is, is to draw a little light on a sticky and place it on my art...I have four of them...two facing forward (1 left/1 right) and two facing away from me (left/right)...and then if I ever have doubt, I actually find something close to the shape and put a light source on it...

[rhysgroves]

thankyou everyone for your advice, I have taken it on board, and I will be back to the drawing board. with all the advice you have given me, again thanks for the advice....

Rhys (LONDON)

[yardartnut]

looks good.......post the next...