Oh!! zero420--I know it's kind of mean but I love when airbrushers have to work their way backwards all the way to the fundamentals again..this lettering on your shirt looks just fine & it's done as well as possible the way you went about it (perfectly legit!!)--but it's not hand lettering & now that you've found how valuable lettering is to a tshirt artist you won't be happy until master this new quest set in front of you..& then it's on to something else--it's not just enough knowing how to letter--you have to learn how to arrange said letters (layout) & it can become a life long learning adventure.. I've been at this a long time now & I learn something new just about everyday..it gets tiresome from time to time but as a general rule I stay excited over it..that would be the secret--stay enthused with learning..

Your enthusiasm shows--it's running over the brim!!